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Old 22nd April 2012, 12:46 PM
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ohdi khed agge kinhi vaar harda rea,
kujh bol je bulaan 'te aounde taan dil awaaz maar k rokda rea......

hanju vagn de sochde, taan v dil kurlaa janda,
kehnda aiven na hanju dol ohde muhre, te muskra adea....

par vaar vaar ohdi thokr maari seenhe ch ik garm seekh vaang chubdi c,
chaale inhe hoye doonge k ohdi deedh di bhukh v mita c rea......

par.......oh har vaar jandi jandi murh aoundi,
te pyaar da ik bol suna k marhm loun di koshish krdi,,,
dil v mom ho k thorha,, soun vich pehlaan ponde morr vaang jhoom utthda rea....

injh jaapda uss pal k khushiaan murh aiyan,
te dil v murh tonh zakhma tonh ubbr k drdaan de hasptaal(hospital) tonh chuti hai le rea...

par aggle pal oh fr mukh morh jandi ae,
te dil nu fir tonh goojji satt maar jandi ae...
dil fr kurla utthda ae dard naal,
te hnjuaan nu zindgi di daud vich awal aoun lai keh hai rea....

mareej rea dil har ik pal lai, te murh tonh peerhaan de darr 'te matha ragrh rea,
maut hi de dao GuRi nu, ehi dil dua ant kr rea......

oh aakhda akk gea haan main iss duniyavi khed tonh,
jithe zindgi v maut toh batrr pyaar te jagg hai bnaa rea.....


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ohdi khed agge kinhi vaar harda rea,
kujh bol je bulaan 'te aounde taan dil awaaz maar k rokda rea......

dil fr kurla utthda ae dard naal,
te hnjuaan nu zindgi di daud vich awal aoun lai keh hai rea....

mareej rea dil har ik pal lai, te murh tonh peerhaan de darr 'te matha ragrh rea,
maut hi de dao GuRi nu, ehi dil dua ant kr rea......

oh aakhda akk gea haan main iss duniyavi khed tonh,
jithe zindgi v maut toh batrr pyaar te jagg hai bnaa rea.....




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ohdi khed agge kinhi vaar harda rea,
kujh bol je bulaan 'te aounde taan dil awaaz maar k rokda rea......

dil fr kurla utthda ae dard naal,
te hnjuaan nu zindgi di daud vich awal aoun lai keh hai rea....

mareej rea dil har ik pal lai, te murh tonh peerhaan de darr 'te matha ragrh rea,
maut hi de dao GuRi nu, ehi dil dua ant kr rea......

oh aakhda akk gea haan main iss duniyavi khed tonh,
jithe zindgi v maut toh batrr pyaar te jagg hai bnaa rea.....




Wah veer ... 22 Appa te Pehla hI Keh CHuke Han ki Mere kol Sabd nhi Tuhadi Tareef lyi ... U r Such a Wonderfull Writer ... keep It up veer ji ... Raab Hor Traki Bakhshe ,,, Edda hi Likhda Reh veer ,,,

bht bht mehrbaani veere.......'n naah yr...writer kithe...eh taan aiven hi tym pass kr lita keyboard naal........kujh soch ni likhea...aiven hi likhea gea........par smjh hje tk ni lggi k ki aa.......lolzzz

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