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♥ ਉਹ " ਕਮਲੀ "ਚੋਰੀ-ਚੋਰੀ ਲੰਘਦੀ ਆ ਮੇਰੇ ਪਿੰਡ ਵਿੱਚ ਦੀ ♥
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♥ ਉਸਦਾ " ਪ੍ਰੀਤ " ਉਸਨੂੰ ਆਪਣੀ ਕਿਸਮਤ ਚ ਲਿਖਾਉਣ ਦੇ ਲਈ ਰੱਬ ਨੂੰ ਲੱਭਦਾ ਫਿਰਦਾ ♥


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Oh " Kamli " Chori-Chori Langdi Aa Mere Pind Vich Di
Mainu Vekhan De Lyi
par Oh Eh Nahi Jandi
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Osda Preet Osnu Apni Kisamt Vich Likhaun De Lyi Raab Nu Labhda Firda

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hay ohey lba phir ke nai dear
je rab laban na janda ta os de darshan ta ho jande



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y ji raab bande ander wasda bhar kithe labda firda e

but nice lines
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Dhanvaad veer .... kde-kde likh laine a 22
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22 Dhanvaad .... Ehi Tan Gal c Main Jyada Lambi soch gya
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